Sunday night, September 29, 2008, it was about 11:00 pm. Of course school was the next day. So I was pretty sure I'd be dragging in the morning and decided to make my way to bed. Of course I'm a procrastinating girl and it took some time to get everything in place, like my ipod on the "sleep" playlist, my innscents on to the best of there ability, and the window creeked open just a smidge to receive the lovely breeze of the late night. Lying against my suede pillow, my eyes easily drifted into a deep sleep, that's when it hit me, like a 5,000 lb. truck! The most majestic dream I've ever had. It wasn't one of those goofy dreams, where you wake up like, "what was I thinking?" No, it was almost real. It was a rainy day out, but everything from the leaves to the bushes, even the grass, were just filled with color. I walked to this meadow and the grass was a dull green color almost gray, then I saw him. This boy from my dreams I've never met, but I felt like I knew him, almost as if he were my best friend. Unfortunatly in my dream he was tied down...isn't that a coincedence. So I was inspired as soon as I awoke, I wrote it all down in my poem journal and here's what I came up with!
Rain beats down hard, enveloping my body with every drop,
My vision blurred, elongated raindrops suspend on my lashes.
Ruby lips turn plum as the icy air grazes over my porcelain face.
Sliding feet fall out of my shoes as the puddles take control.
Perturbed eyes stare anxiously at the meadow before me.
Flowers loud in the gray grass; then I see him, waiting.
How I wish the rain would evaporate his clothing,I
believe then his skin would jump to me in thirst.
Eyes stare past my exterior, straight into my saddened soul,
Each step towards each other erupts more yearning.
Both clouds of breath almost touch creating a cloud.
Then we are there, noses only inches away from the others.
Our eyes are burning with drive, to touch the others cheek,
His hands tangle in my soaking hair, I blush a deep red.
Then in the corner of my eye she appears, ravishing as always.
His hands left me, with one yearning stare he vanished.
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4 comments:
You are a prodigy...
Your writing is ama-za-ing.
I Agree with Mel. You are amazing! i love the way you write and the style you write it in... OH! And what ever happened to that one book you were writing last year that i always wanted to read in science?! that book was aewsome!
I too think I have had this dream. :) I enjoyed this. I like to picture this story and dream in my mind. The ending is always uncalled for. Then she...I like that. But I must say I really like your blogging style. You are creative with it. This is a blog I would really like to follow. To hear the different stories and dreams that bubble up in your mind. You are very inspiring. I wish I had your writing abilities. You know the ability to take this scenario that is in your mind and write it down to share with others. Good Job!
oh and I LOVE YOU!
Maddi.
your way with words is freaking insane kaila. seriously, some of your posts are so long and i don't have time to read them, but i end up doing it anyways, because i literally cannot stop. you're amazing. loveeeeee you! :)
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